雅思写作参考范文

首段：争议焦点 +　个性开篇 + (写作目的)

Nothing　has　 received　more debate than multiple career choice. Although we may pride ourselves on our reasonable careers, we are no longer free to depend on a single career, for some people become well-educated and cherish big ambition, therefore, fewer people wish to work the same job day in and day out.

翻译：没有什么像多元职业选择一样引起人们的争议，我们以自己事业自豪，但是，我们已经不能再依赖一份工作。很多人受到良好教育，胸怀大志，很少有人愿意做一份工作。

点评：本文也可不写首段尾句：This essay aims to explore the reasons of job-hopping and then discuss its pros and cons. 但是，文无定法。本文的创新是争议焦点在背景介绍之前。

二段：多元职业的两个原因的展开：

The reasons of constant job transition are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, young workers are generally attracted by high salary and possible job-promotion and chances of self-improvement in new job opportunities. Further, many enterprises have been experienced economic downturn， thus sliming down isinevitable. Meanwhile, world markets seem to be always fluctuating. Individual cannot expect to have the same job.

翻译：多元的职业的原因是很多的。现在我将分析一些原因。第一，很多年轻人被新工作带来的高薪，晋升，成长的机会吸引。第二，企业经历经济的低迷，精简机构不可避免，同时，世界市场变化波动，个人不能期待从事一门工作。

点评：完美的原因的展开：主观谈及客观。slim down v 精简机构

三段：利好的展开：

Seen from the positive aspects, a number benefits could be gained via job-hopping. The most glaring merit is that one could establish well-connected interpersonal relationship, which usually brings about more space for career development. Meanwhile, diverse cultures of different enterprises could be experienced, Another virtue deriving from multiple career choice is that job hoping means a broad range of work and life experience and constant refreshment. Conversely，single career choice sometimes means absenteeism and slack in working. Last，one could acquire various vocational skills, accumulate rich working experience, in this sense, one could embrace more opportunities of success.

翻译：从积极角度看，多元职业利好很多，最明显的优点在于人可以建立良好的人脉资源，人脉带来职业成长的空间。同时，人可以体验不同企业的多元文化。另外的优点在于多元职业意味着丰富的工作经验和人生阅历以及持久的新鲜感，相反，单一职业选择有时候意味着工作的懈怠和懒惰。最后，多元职业帮助人获得多元的职业技能，积累丰富人生经验。因此，职员可以获得更多成功的机会。

点评：

establish well-connected interpersonal relationship v 建立良好的人脉资源：

diverse cultures of different enterprises could be experienced v 人可体验不同企业的多元文化

Another virtue deriving from multi-career choice is that 另外一个来自多元职业的利好在于 = further 第二;

means absenteeism and slack in working v 意味着职业的倦怠以及懒散：

acquire various vocational skills v 学习多元的职业技能

embrace more opportunities of success. v 拥抱更多的成功的机会：

savor v 品味……

四段：两点弊端的展开：

However，problems invariably ensue. Initially, it is also possible that those job-hoppers fall into financial difficulties if skipping between jobs too frequently. Another demerit is that in the eyes of some business owners, the fondness of job switching reflects, to some extent, employees’ disloyalty and lack of dedication to jobs.

翻译：然而，问题随着发生。第一，跳槽者可能因为过于频繁跳槽而陷入经济困难。第二，在老板眼里，喜欢跳槽在某种程度上反映了他们的不忠诚而且对工作缺乏奉献精神。

点评：从个人角度以及企业角度谈及：

尾段：支持多元职业：

In closing，it is my stand that one of the traits of modern way of working is that people enjoy more freedom in selecting their favorite careers. However， in the long run, there is something more important than a stable job prospect. Therefore, ambitious and gifted youngsters should be inspired to explore the unknown and constantly surpass themselves. The multi-career option is universally suitable for vast majority of modern people.

翻译：总之，我认为现代工作方式的特征之一就是人们择业选择更加自由，但是，从长期看，有比工作稳定更加重要的考虑因素。因此，雄心勃勃的才华横溢的年轻人应该探究未知，自我超越。多元职业选择适合大部分的现代人。

点评：…… should be inspired to explore the unknown and constantly surpass themselves.……应该被鼓励去探究未知的世界，不断自我超越(支持极限运动;支持出国留学)：

总体点评：雅思写作本文主题明确;逻辑清晰;朴素华丽词汇搭配使用，用到强调句，插入语，现在分词做后置修饰语，被动语态，形式主语等多变句法。

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