Love is of the utmost importance to us humans. Everybody not only needs love, but also should give others love. As can be seen in the picture, "love is a lamp which is brighter in darker places." This is indeed true. People in darker places need more light than other people. Maybe even a dim light can give them much hope for a better life. Maybe just a thread of light will call forth their strength and courage to help them step out of their difficulties. I can think of no better illustration of this idea than the following examples. (Numerous examples can be given easily, but these will suffice For instance when someone is starving to death, just a little food and water from you may save his(her) life. Again, when a little girl in a poor rural area drops out of school because of poverty, just a small sum of money from you may support her t o finish school and change her life. In these circumstances you have given love which is like a lamp in a dark place where light is most needed. To sum up, we should offer our help to all the needed. We expect to get love from others and we also give love to others. So when you see someone in difficulty or in distress and in need of help, don't hesitate to give your love to him (her). I believe that the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in.

1、The children were running on the playground as fast as they can.

改：can-could

解释：主句是过去进行时，从句也应该是过去时，保持一致。

2、Since her husband had died, so she had to support her family.

改：把so去掉。

解释：since表示原因，不需要so再来表示结果。两个词不能同时用在一个句子中。

3、He won't go out until his mother will come.

改：will come-comes

解释：主句是一般将来时，until引导的时间状语从句用现在时表示将来，改为第三人称单数。

4、He was very foolish that he didn't pass such an easy exam.

改：very-so

解释：so...that，如此……以至于。

5、Tom had gone out as soon as his mother got home.

改：had gone-gone

解释：主句用一般过去时。

6、It was three months since he came to our school.

改：was-is

解释：从过去到现在的一段时间，用现在时。

7、The platground of our school is larger than their school.

改：加上 that of (their school)。

解释：操场要和操场作比较，不是跟学校比。用that来指代。

8、The streets in Nanjing are wider than Shanghai.

改：those in (Shanghai)。

解释：街道要和街道比较。用those来指代复数的名词。

高考英语作文万能句子：结尾句型

I will conclude by saying...最后我要说…

Therefore,we have the reason to believe that...因此，我们有理由相信…

All things considered,总而言之 It may be safely said that...它可以有把握地说......

Therefore,in my opinion,it's more advisable...因此，在我看来，更可取的是…

From my point of view,it would be better if...在我看来……也许更好

高考英语作文万能句子：开头句型

As far as...is concerned 就……而言

It goes without saying that...不言而喻，...

It can be said with certainty that...可以肯定地说......

As the proverb says，正如谚语所说的，

It has to be noticed that...它必须注意到，...

It's generally recognized that...它普遍认为...

It's likely that...这可能是因为...

It's hardly that...这是很难的......

It's hardly too much to say that...它几乎没有太多的说…

What calls for special attention is that...需要特别注意的是

There's no denying the fact that...毫无疑问，无可否认

Nothing is more important than the fact that...没有什么比这更重要的是…

what's far more important is that...更重要的是…